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Storyboard: Honour Amongst Thieves v.02 by Quarter-Virus Storyboard: Honour Amongst Thieves v.02 by Quarter-Virus
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Homework for LASALLE College of the Arts: Revised storyboard of my animation major, but the ending is still weak and the action sequences drag on.


--Sak
All characters and artwork © Shamine Athena King
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PapillonCameo Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013
"Oh, merde, je suis bien trop gentil pour mon propre bien." for "Oh, hell, (merde is actually shit in french, but it works better then l'enfer, which is hell) I am far too nice for my own good."

As for "de quoi" .. "Qu'est ce que?" Which translates to "What the?" might work.

I hope that helps, and feel free to send a note if you have other questions. ^^
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paladinofthelantern Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
"....the message is not that religion is a negative thing and thus should be overthrown,the message is about overcoming your initial misconceptions about a person in order to work together to achieve a greater goal."

I am so glad you stated that. Too many Christians don't take the message to "love thy neighbor" seriously. Just because someone has a different view than you do doesn't mean you can't love them like anyone else. :)
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EvilDeadlyWolf Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
>3< ommmg xD!!! a loove that >3< just AWESOME ahah :D!!! *3*
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Falcolf Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Professional Filmographer
If you can produce this, you'll be seriously bloody amazing and I think animation studios will be scrambling to have you. This is just already really fantastic and I couldn't look away once while I was reading/viewing it. I think it's serious inspiration for what good storyboards look like and I count myself inspired. I'm looking forwards to seeing your finished piece someday! :D
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Quarter-Virus Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Professional Filmographer
Thank you so very much! Of course the hard part IS producing it, I'm stressed out already! Aaahh!!
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Falcolf Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Professional Filmographer
You can do it! :D You're amazing! :)
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KinYuNe Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012
Loving the storyboard, very cohesive and I look forward to the final result!

the story concept reminds me so much of a manga artist from the late 70's, early 80's. Look up her work! "Aoike Yasuko" has very similar characters whose ancestors exist throughout "history". (of course, I say this lightly, as I recall it wasn't all too accurate) Yeah, mostly this reminds me of her biggest work "Eroica Yori Ai wo Komete", but at the same time appears to take place during a similar period such as in her "El Halcon".

Looking forward to your more modern take on it! (Personally, I like your style better than hers as I just ADORE the lines in Louis character design...<3)
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Quarter-Virus Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Professional Filmographer
I am aware of Eroica With Love because people keep making comparisons and it's driving me crazy, especially since I wasn't aware of the manga at all when developing these characters because, frankly, I tend to hate anime/manga and avoid it like the plague.

But thanks.
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PincessTorhu Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Student General Artist
Wow this is really amazing~! I myself am working on my own storyboads from my animatics class, and these are just magnificent! I'm a huge fan of Louis aswell, I really love the way you portray him and his movements and design~ <3
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jiko29 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Louis does have sexy, sexy boots.... <3
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Silk-Ward Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
man i just want to see it finished so bad! it looks really great for a concept~~
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44NTW44 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Student Writer
Are you going to include the LGBT/pirate community? I really like that idea.
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moonlily7 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012
lol i love it
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Coolofraise13 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012
Awesome, however I miss the "Really?" of James when he looks at the heels of Louis. For the traductions, "Mais qu'est-ce que?!?" for "the hell" and "Je suis beaucoup trop gentil" would do nice.
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Ginger-Seat Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012
I love your characters. You've got serious talent. :)
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AlecMagnus1 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012
It´s sssooooooooooooooo Funny !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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geek-de-la-musique Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
cooooool. I really want to see the finished product!
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vamplover99 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
This looks like it's going to be amazing! I can't wait to see what's next!
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NoisyBunny Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
When will I be able to see more updates?~
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Saria29 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ooh, more frames? :D Good luck.
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FreakoftheAngels Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Student General Artist
Awesome. The final project will be perfect, I know t!
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Lapulta Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm dying to know how you managed to think up: 'with a little nice bow on the back'.... xD
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universalgoddess13 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
are we going to see the animatic when it's finished?
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Trunse Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Please don't loose the "I'm shaking in my sexy boots". Whatever you do that line HAS to stay! xD
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tenderheartedthorn Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012
oh this is just wonderful!
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TheOneChaos Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
nice!

but i liked the version when Luis tilt the painting back...
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SpacePirateRyoko Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012
Is he seriously eying Louis's sexy legs??? What happened to being a prude?
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Buhyoo Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012
I love your characters, your art and your jokes : it's just so fantastic !

Maybe I can help you ?
"Oh, hell, I am far too nice for my own good" = "Bon sang ! Ma bonté me perdra" (I have some difficulties with the translation of "hell" (even if "bon sang" is a good interjection for this translation), but "ma bonté me perdra" is correct in French)

I don't know of speak English, sorry !
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sophatizer Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wooo! It's brilliant! Keep at it ^_^
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Constance-fire Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
lawl. manly bickering is manly
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Tie-Dyed-Trickster Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012
While I might not be allowed to be too attached to the story, I am totally attached to the characters! Louis and James are officially my fav pirate and navy officer - they have outshone Jack Sparrow and Commodore Norrington. Louis is simply too fabulous and James is too himself not to completely adore both of them! ^^
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Quarter-Virus Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Professional Filmographer
Oh wow, Hunter has surpassed Norrington? Poor man, and he was the original inspiration!
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Rhianimation Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Student
hahahahaha my favorite bits of this where

L: well scince you doid put up a fight I can see my self giving you 10% of my cut
J: TEN PERCENT?
L:oh alright five

and

L: Oh I'm shaking in my sexy boots


Bahahahaha Great I love it!!
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HightopKinsleighFAN Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012
Words can not describe how I am feeling right now... Well they can, but enthusiastic, awed, and anticipated all seem like an understatement. ;) Beautifully done! Very humorous as well.
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Quarter-Virus Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Professional Filmographer
Thanks very much!
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HightopKinsleighFAN Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
You are very much welcome :) (I just LOVE your art. Sometimes I wish I could be as talented as you.)
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Comical1 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
just WOW :wow: I look forward to seeing this animated :D :D
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izzybr Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
cant wait 2 see this :D
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SCAITBLUE Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012
i talk spanish so i can help you with santiago

where he says Que vuelvas¡¡ maricon¡¡ it would sound better if he says "Vuelve aqui ¡¡ maricon ¡¡ "cause like that it sounds odd.......
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Quarter-Virus Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Professional Filmographer
I got suggestions for "Que vuelvas, maricon", what's the difference with "Vuelve aqui"?
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SCAITBLUE Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
Vuelve Aqui its sounds more like a order its like say hmmmm Come back here in english , and its more used xD like in frenck there are many ways to say the same word as i see .. que vuelvas , maricon its the same but its sounds less powerfull in meaning it ....at least i find it like t hat when i say it with the other word o-o hmmm
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ketu-uchiha64 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
FANTASTIC! MAGNIFIQUE! SUPERBE!
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CrazyDrawerJess Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
this is FABULOUS!!
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FFAvatarBender Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012
Who will be voicing the characters?
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Quarter-Virus Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Professional Filmographer
I'll be looking for voice actors once the script is done.
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Lunatuica Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist
I love this version! By the way, when Santiago screams at Louis, I think it would be "¡Que vuelvas, maricón!" or "¡Vuelve, maricón!" instead of "Que vuelvas, tu maricón!", the expression "you + adjetive" doesn't exist in spanish!
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Quarter-Virus Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Professional Filmographer
Thanks for clarifying, I wasn't actually sure since I haven't had Spanish lessons in years. x___X The words I could memorize ... the grammar I couldn't.
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KimmiComics Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I Can't wait till I see this moving ^^
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13thAlyce Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Student General Artist
I love when they're playing with the picture, as soon as I saw it my mind animated it & I nearly dropped my laptop I was laughing so hard. They're amazing characters & they're just so real it's amazing.
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